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Yesterdat I went to church in order to practice for my church's festival. That day is February 28th. My team will play a farce. Its content is based on a drama which is based on Japaness comic. It is very famous so Japan and Taiwan have already dramatized. We praticed a farce but I can't concentrate it . Because it was very funny so I could't but laugh consistently. My part is a bodyguad who protect a hero clumsily. I expect our farce will finish successfully.

 

 

Hi, Nicole!

 

Here are the revisions of your composition.. I overlooked it..

 

Hope I didn't change the idea..

 

 

Thanks,

 

 

~Mark

 

 

Yesterday, I went to church to practice ( rehearse )  for my church's festival. That is on February 28th. My team will play a farce. It is the story based on a drama which conceptualized on Japaness comic. It is very famous that Japan and Taiwan decided to  dramatized. We praticed a farce but I can't concentrate . Because it was very funny so I could't help to laugh most of the time. My part is a bodyguad who protect a hero who is clumsy. I expect our farce will finish successfully.  

 

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