i need to bend someone's ear all night. i was so stumped yesterday. i thought why i was standing there and what i was doing at that time. i'm missing those times - my seasons in the sun. it was when i talked to friends, drank, cried and laughed without any worries. maybe, those kinds of time are not completely finished yet. for sure, it's gonna happen to me again. it was only the start, wasn't it? coz i'm still young. most of all, there are many people who support me. it makes me so happy. they listen to me and boost me up all the time. that's the reason why my life is now worthwhile. i always keep them in mind. thank you for being always there.
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I need to bend someone's ear all night. I was so stumped yesterday. I thought why i was standing there and what am I doing at that time. I missed those times - my seasons in the sun. It was when i talked to friends, drank, cried and laughed without any worries. Maybe, those kinds of time are not completely finished yet. For sure its going to happen again. It was just the start, wasn't it? coz i'm still young. most of all, there are many people who support me. it makes me so happy. they listen to me and boost me up all the time. that's the reason why my life is now worthwhile. i always keep them in mind. thank you for being always there.
Sienna,
Good Day! I'm so happy that you were able to express your self well in this composition. Fee free to do it again when ever you are available.
Take care!
Love,
Teacher Jhing |
