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I drank a cup of coffe at frist.Coffe is very delicious and sweet.even papercup of coffee. Coffee have anti-caner compounds.It is best crops.Many people drinking a cup of coffe. but It have many caffeine.It is increase heart palpitation and blood pressure and body trperature.I think need self-restraint.also I think whatever too much eat bad.

 

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I drank a cup of coffee.  At first coffee is very delicious and sweet.  Even if it is just an ordinary coffee.  Coffee also has anti-cancer compounds. It is on of the best crops.  Many people drink a cup of coffee, but it has many caffeine.  It can increase the palpitation of the heart, blood pressure and body temperature. I think I need to restrain myself from drinking coffee.  I think if you take too much of something is bad for your health.

 

Anam,

 

Good day!

 

Above is the edited paragraph for your diary.  You did a great job because you add some information about coffee.  I think you don't have to stop drinking coffee but you have to watch the amount of coffee that you drink each day.  Coffee is good for the body because it is antiixidant and it has anti cancer compunds, but we only need 4 ounces of coffee a day.  Drinking 4 ounces of coffee a day is not bad for the health. 

 

Take care!

Joy

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